I like this one much better..funny about Dave’s pants. Nice short Script and now I’m left hanging which is good because you now have my attention. I can’t wait to see what is next. I’m liking the humor here…On the downside the scenes going back and forth between Neal and Dave were choppy and seemed force. No fluid not natural enough..but that is the camera man..editing department. The scare in the gas station was lame. I knew what was going to be said and what was going to happen before it happened. I think that Neal and David together as actors/comedians are very funny even though they are writers. Dave has good timing playing off Neal as the straight man. As much as it is serious the underlying Comedic factor is so out there and hysterical it is hard to overlook it. That’s because of the talent of Neal Fischer and Dave Navarro. Now that is just my personal opinion!!
I like this one much better..funny about Dave’s pants. Nice short Script and now I’m left hanging which is good because you now have my attention. I can’t wait to see what is next. I’m liking the humor here…On the downside the scenes going back and forth between Neal and Dave were choppy and seemed force. No fluid not natural enough..but that is the camera man..editing department. The scare in the gas station was lame. I knew what was going to be said and what was going to happen before it happened. I think that Neal and David together as actors/comedians are very funny even though they are writers. Dave has good timing playing off Neal as the straight man. As much as it is serious the underlying Comedic factor is so out there and hysterical it is hard to overlook it. That’s because of the talent of Neal Fischer and Dave Navarro. Now that is just my personal opinion!!
Hahah! I’ve totally forgot to put on pants before.
I couldn’t read what was on the board though!!
Dave! Remember when 1MC acted in Man-d’s “The Odessey” remake? lol. You were Cyclopes. lol. Good times.